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Offline Rettsehcnamz

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Re: Kotak Puisi *Melo Mode On*
« Reply #20 on: September 21, 2007, 10:56:53 PM »
[dedicated to A.R.]

why I do
why I do...
why???

you're sky
everything bout you is sky
sky at morning
sky at noon
sky at night
it's you
you with your everywhere

I've tried so hard
to hide from your existance
it was making me feel
alone, sad, fall... again and again

you teach me about love
"there's no givin' in
there's no givin' up
in love."

you've made me give up
it was so long...

everytime I try to forget you
there's sky there
there's sky...

seeing you
believing you
watching me again

I've tried so hard
to say goodbye


gmn??? kaco dak yaaa...

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Re: Kotak Puisi *Melo Mode On*
« Reply #21 on: September 23, 2007, 04:33:08 PM »
waLah bagus2 .
kok pada bisa bikin puisi?
....

1-1_ny puisi yg pernah gw bikin .
[gra2 tugas bahasa indo huahahaha :mrgreen:] .

Bencana
mengapa di tanahku sering terjadi bencana?
mungkin tuhan sudah bosan melihat tingkah laku kita
yang selalu berbuat dosa
atau mungkin alam sudah marah kepada kita
karena kita tak pernah merawatnya
karena kita selalu merusaknya
semua salah kita
yang hanya bisa merusak,tak berusaha untuk merawatnya
kita,manusia yang selalu berbuat salah,dan bangga atas kesalahannya.


huahahahaha .
steLa gw baca Lg ni puisi ..
kok gw ngerasa kyk_ny seorang gw gk mungkin bkin ginian ya ..
jangan2 gw nyontek pnya orang Lg ..
hmm ..

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Re: Kotak Puisi *Melo Mode On*
« Reply #22 on: September 23, 2007, 05:13:32 PM »
wah puisinya indah"..
ikutan ah~
ini slah stu puisiku..

¤Terpana¤

Terpana..
Dalam diamku..
Kurasa kau di sana..
Bebaskanku dari belenggu..

Terpana..
Dalam indahnya dunia..
Meski hatiku semu..
Tanpa dirimu..

Aku..
Berjalan sendiri..
Menyusuri jalan sepi..
Sebelum kita bertemu..

Kamu..
Datang menemani..
Dengan wajah berseri..
Hangatkan hati yang beku..

Aku terpana..
Mengenang dirimu..
Saat bersama..
Kala bertemu..

Aku terpana..
Teringat yang tlah lalu..
Namun nyatanya..
Hampa sudah hidupku..
« Last Edit: September 23, 2007, 05:21:14 PM by ¤whitesilva¤ »

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Which Final Fantasy Character Are You?
Final Fantasy 7


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Re: Kotak Puisi *Melo Mode On*
« Reply #23 on: September 23, 2007, 05:16:56 PM »
lagi ah../lala

As no X-rays could  

There he sat..
Waiting silently..
Longing hopelessly..
Alone..

He remembered the smile..
The one he made there..
Though maybe inside he cried..
Alone..

He didn't know who he was to them..
He didn't know who they were to him..
He didn't really know..
And neither did he care..

For he had worn too much fake smile on his face..
For he had shown too much fake laugh in his life..
For he had disguised too much as anotherself..

Though a recluse he had been..
Still none of them knew..
And nobody could see..
As no x-rays could..
« Last Edit: September 23, 2007, 05:20:14 PM by ¤whitesilva¤ »

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Re: Kotak Puisi *Melo Mode On*
« Reply #24 on: September 23, 2007, 05:19:11 PM »
lagi ah..
*ktagihan*=9

Dalam Bayang Hujan

Deras hujan terus tercurah..
Seakan langit turut mengerti..
Kala hatiku galau dan resah..
Dan berharap ditemani..

Tetes air yang terjatuh..
Menenggelamkanku dalam irama..
Seiring air mengalir jauh..
Mengalir jua ingatan lama..

Saat semua begitu indah..
Waktu begitu cepat berlalu..
Yang tersisa hanyalah kisah..
Tentang mereka yang membisu..

Entah sejak kapan..
Walau begitu semu..
Aku seakan melihatmu..
Dalam bayang hujan..

Entah sampai kapan..
Aku harus menunggu..
'Tuk lepaskan rindu..
Dalam bayang hujan..

Tak jua aku mengerti..
Pula tak ingin 'tuk pahami..
Walau hujan 'kan berhenti..
Tak demikian kisah ini..

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Final Fantasy 7


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Offline Rettsehcnamz

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Re: Kotak Puisi *Melo Mode On*
« Reply #25 on: September 25, 2007, 10:54:20 PM »
huehehehe

emang pada keren2 disini

sisi melo + puitisnya keluar semua

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Moonlight Night

once upon a night
one beautiful night
I woke up
looking at your fake face
then thought that you was there

I took a look
at the window
and saw
moonlight night

remember you
once again
still the same night
the same moonlight
when I'd kill you

I kept your blood
I kept your heart
I kept your eyes

remember you
once again
still the same
moonlight night


heaaahhh

kok jadi gini???

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Re: Kotak Puisi *Melo Mode On*
« Reply #26 on: September 25, 2007, 11:00:22 PM »
satu lagi aaahhh

*ketularan penyakitnya whitesilva*

____

Falling Glass

I don't wanna replays that memories
saw you death in front of me once again
then I sleep in sadness and tears
with you haunting, wondering about love

I always try to notice you, always
like an endless hope, cry, but also smile
beautiful memories, thousand stories
I never thought that it will be happened

you there. just there. I saw you stand there
in a bad terrible rainy storm day... dark noon
you stood and take a look at me: sad eyes
then you fall

until this time...

so I scream. I just hear a lil song bout this,
still notice you, notice me, all about us...,
"At the end of the world or the last thing I see,
you're never coming home." Then I realize

I went first
to a place
in our heart
heavier than heaven

love


heaaahhh

aq mimpi klo aja punya kisah semanis dan setragis ini...

Offline Rettsehcnamz

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Re: Kotak Puisi *Melo Mode On*
« Reply #27 on: September 26, 2007, 10:57:38 PM »
lagi...

abis sebuah peristiwa yang membekas dalam hati...

*melo banget mode on*

_____

Everytime

Everyday in my life
was terribly wonderful
but then you come
just suddenly, suddenly

one more tremble here

you took my wing once
repeat the memories
making me fall from the sky
your heaven, your self
repeat our memories

it remembered how
we were such fool in time,
"Love is unbelieavable,
it don't wanna let us go."
it was a lie, it was a curse
it cursed me, don't you know???

fergie sing to me,
"and I'm gonna miss you
like child miss their blanket
but I have to go on with my life...

"it's turn to be a big girl now
and big girl's don't cry."

So I tried, I always tried
to not cry. stand. alone. sky

there you once again
falling glass. blue sky
I hope I could forget you
but there you there...
once again
everytime

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Re: Kotak Puisi *Melo Mode On*
« Reply #28 on: September 26, 2007, 11:14:39 PM »
Roses are red ..
Violets are blue ..

Shut up or I'll sew your mouth with glue!

that's it ^^
We're free to go anywhere we want
We're free to do anything we want

Heartplace by Ayumi Hamasaki

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Re: Kotak Puisi *Melo Mode On*
« Reply #29 on: September 26, 2007, 11:20:27 PM »
gyaaa...

kk aoi ngerusak melo mode aja... huehehehehe...

ada 2 warn nih:

1. itu pantun. bukan puisi. eh, pantun juga puisi, y? *bingung ndiri*

2. yang bener tuh gini:

roses are red
violets are blue

sugars are sweet
and so are you

hahuahuahuha. so sweet

biasanya ada di kotak balasan white day... ummm...

____

melo mode diidupin lagi

ON!